Necrobane

by Daniel M. Ford

Genres: Fantasy
Pages: 366
Series: The Warden #2
Rating:

Synopsis:

Aelis de Lenti, Lone Pine's newly assigned Warden, is in deep trouble. She has just opened the crypts of Mahlgren, releasing an army of the undead into the unprotected backwoods of Ystain.

To protect her village, she must unearth a source of immense Necromantic power at the heart of Mahlgren. The journey will wind through waves of undead, untamed wilderness, and curses far older than anything Aelis has ever encountered. But as strong as Aelis is, this is one quest she cannot face alone.

Along with the brilliant mercenary she's fallen for, her half-orc friend, and a dwarven merchant, Aelis must race the clock to unravel mysteries, slay dread creatures, and stop what she has set in motion before the flames of a bloody war are re-ignited.

I received a copy of this book for free in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.

I’d meant to dig into Daniel M. Ford’s Necrobane right away after reading the first book, but somehow it didn’t happen. Fortunately, I felt like I was able to plunge back into the world really well — I don’t feel like I could explain to you the magic system of the world in any detail, even after just finishing the book, but it feels lived in. I want to be clear: it’s not a criticism! I feel kind of like the friends and acquaintances Aelis has, watching from the outside her very academic understanding of what she does. There are rules here, it’s just that I don’t know them, and that’s handled well by the story.

The story picks up more or less where we left off, with Aelis hurrying to deal with the aftermath of her actions in The Warden. We get more of Tun and Maurenia as characters, and more cool magic, and a twist that I basically saw coming (though I’m pretty sure you’re supposed to, it was so obvious that the tension was more in waiting for what would come of it, rather than whether something would come of it).

Some of the things that irritated me a bit in the first book, like Aelis’ tendency to talk to herself, were somewhat better here? Or rather, she kept doing so, but it felt less obtrusive and more natural.

I do feel a bit meh about her lack of forward planning, though; it feels like it allows for a somewhat sloppy plot (though it probably feels that way because it’s third-person limited, very tight to Aelis). It doesn’t take a super clever opponent to have her run herself into a trap, but we’re supposed to believe Dalius is very cunning, very clever, and Aelis can still run rings around him while just reacting to every situation rather than planning ahead. Even when she deliberately charges into a trap, her plan is basically “be really fast and strong”. Great. It’s entertaining reading, don’t get me wrong, but it does all feel a bit ad hoc.

In any case, the ending is rather a cliffhanger — some of Aelis’ problems are gone, but now she has a whole new one, which I definitely didn’t predict. I’m keen to pick up The Advocate soon.

Rating: 4/5